Aww an example of how rain can ruin anyone’s good day.

And then everything went wrong.. The lack of quotation marks bothered me at first, but then it made it seem like the protagonist was retelling his memory to us.

High five for “smelt” instead of “smelled” and “like fat pancakes” even though you can’t smell fatness. I’m not being sarcastic, I sincerely love those lines.

Not what I was looking for, but it was still a good story.