yeah, so it was from the prey’s POV, when you get inspired, you get inspired, and the more challenge entries there are, the harder it is to be original. I sympathize. This was almost gritty, if there was more hate.. but not sure you have that in you. :)
That was depressing, but kudos for the facial wound detail, those little sores that drug addicts get (partially from neglect and harsh living, but also due to ‘formication’).