yipes!
nice thriller! We know the movie is fake, and just like in the horror flick, we expect the form outside, but trick ourselves into believing it’s not there, then BANG! it is!

Ooo scary! Lol although I did find the line, “shivering until my tits ache” to be funny. Though otherwise I was pretty freaked out.

Hey, the tits line is all trufax. Seriously, when it gets COLD? Ow. :D

:O I’m not the only one with achy tits!

I never knew…

This was a fun little read. You might want to sync up your verb tenses in the first and second paragraphs. You switched from past to present.

So I did… I noticed that but it seemed to make sense at the time. I’ll have to tinker with it later. Thanks for the feedback! :)