Amusing…but not what I was looking for. :/ That probably isn’t what you wanted to hear. I’m not saying this is bad, it’s very good and if you wrote more, I would certainly read more. I’m just saying that it isn’t what I was looking for.

Ok I understand.

I really liked the forelorned witch in the basement in the first story. The second half (about the evil sis) didn’t have the charm of the first half.
This one does recapture some of the Oscar the Grouch charm. I’m hearing the Rolling Stones singing “Paint It Black.”
Maybe the focus of her disdain should be someone other than her sister?

Hmm maybe so. contemplates