You’re doing some jumping back and forth from present to past tense. It’s a neat story so far, this far dire, depressing situation of being in some sort of sparse lock-down and hated by peers and staff alike. I liked the focus on the art project as one redeeming thing and example of the ways she knows she is hated.

yeah wrote it quickly, fixed it!

Hated by peers? Been there. Nicely told.

This could go many places, and it left me with a lot of questions. Hopefully you answer them!

Heh I can relate to hatred. I can relate a lot. Even after being viewed as the “smart-kid” had passed people still thought I was smart. When I wasn’t. Hard living up to fake expectations. XD Great job on the story elsha. I’ll be sure to read the full series. I like the signals you give to show how hated she is.