Really neat, almost magical moment with her wandering around. The setting really calls a lot of questions up as to what sort of place this is, as I don’t know of many orphanages, psych units, or juvenile detention sites with town-replica museums.
That last sentence in the middle paragraph felt a bit long. And nice to see you stuck with past tense for this one.

they punish him even if he follows all the rules ;) I fixed the sentence structure.

i don’t get a chance to explain my vision of this building.. it is a very awkward one.

The idea is that the building started out as an army hospital, but they added an orphanage to keep the public kind of in the dark about the situation with the soldiers. Then the people demand a memorial of some sort, so they build this museum of the way of life they loved, and put it in the same building complex. It is like hiding their mistakes in plain sight, varnishing it in ignorance and fake sympathy.
I dreamed it, so it is odd.

I’m a little less convinced by this one. I’m losing the thread a bit. Reading on…

I’m loving this series, Elsha.

Interesting, You’ve got me curious.