Aaah, the peril. Again, there’s a shade of ficly forcing the narrative too quickly. I’m sprinting to keep up, but I’m reading on. You’ve got me.
phew… I thought they were going to move to exterminate all of the children in the orphanage.
You lapsed back into present tense there at the end. The voice for the military government guy felt real, you know, accurately heartless for a bureaucrat.
oops, i’ll have to fix that..
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