Typos get in the way of an otherwise brisk story.

Otherwise, quite enjoyable!

Think I cleared up most of the typos but let me know if I missed any.

Oooohhh….nice. I like it! I was thinking about writing about a girl but oh well…i’m tired anyway!

I wouldn’t like to cross her. Great pacing with a little twist in the tail. Most enjoyable.

I like it. It is fresh and interesting.