Quite the twist at the end. I’m guessing the phrase “smash hit” wasn’t accidental?

Great opening — great line at the end too.

hahaha, almost like our game thing we talk about. What card is she going to get next in the game??? Makes me want to go dance lol.

Well, this was a twister. Did like the last sentence, too, though the middle got a little jumpy (is that the word I want?) for me.

I especially loved the first and last lines- they remind me of Markus Zusaks’s narrator (Death) in The Book Thief. Nice job!

edited for stovo. :)