well, this goes with your screenname! what an intro to ficly.. :) I’m just now getting to reading all your works. You switched rhyme schemes in the middle of this, which bugs me, but you really conveyed the confusion and loss and heartache.
I was actually reading this one over the other day and I completely agree about the scheme! Luckily it’s a quick fix. Thank you so much for the support, this was a hard time in my life. Writing this poem really helped me =)
iLive The Avant-Garde Way
ElshaHawk (LoA)
iLive The Avant-Garde Way