Desperation, oh how the heart desires. :) Thanks for sharing.

Oh yes.
That last line really pushes this into the bounds of awesomeness.

i must agree with the above!

1/5

just kidding!

Amazing piece!

Wow. That’s one intense piece. Consider my breath taken.

Superlative.

Intense.

Wonderful. (:

awww. very emotional. i like it

Wow. Intense! … I love it!

wow really good story.
5/5 definitely. =D