yeah, it is.

::fans self::
wow, what a ride…

This is…hot! Amazing imagery! You, my friend, have talent! Write more like this and I may have a new addiction!

Eh, I have to disagree with the ladies a bit. I’d give a rating of warm to toasty, but not hot. This is probably more of a reflection of my preferences in erotica, I like more teasing and more physical description, sometimes more dialogue.

Yeah, that’s right, a man asking for more foreplay. Big whoop, wanna fight about it?

As far as the poetry goes, I think this is very solid.

If I’m writing erotica, I’m writing erotica. This is just a bit of erotic poetry. There’s a difference. Besides, my erotica is too long to post on ficly. 1024 characters doesn’t mean much in terms of good sex.

You’re certainly right about that, a kilobyte is far too little.

Ahh, the sweet notion of a wonderful and intricately laid erotic scene.

This is amazing :)
Adorable :) well done, well written!