:O poor Bella! well done i squee with delight :D

At least I figured out what she was after. And why! :)

Great story, I really enjoyed it. I’m just confused with one wording – Bella is a strong feminist, in my opinion, striving to be considered as tough as the men. So it doesn’t make sense that she would use a word like “whore” which degrades women and promotes male dominance (think of how many derogatory words for women, and then for men).

Agreed. Changed it to brothel, a little less degrading I think :)