I love that, everything fits. perfectly. You are talented and becoming experienced with songwriting. the only things I would change are “In night air” or “through night air” (it just has an extra syllable) and then in the beginning “your death reminiscent of grand theft” (needed a syllable or two) and “we are chasing the shadow you cast” (needed to ditch a syllable or two :P) . . . Ok, ok. That’s three- you caught me :P

Dude… im just gonna give you my Pasword…. you can change things then LOL

Hi Brebelles. this is so nice. Are you actually songwriting or has Blossom picked it as that?

nope, I am song writing. :)