Of course he walks in, that’s just her luck lol.

One thing tho, that part _"A wave of tiredness" overwhelms me…" sounds a little… awkward, or funky or something. The rest of the sentence is really good and very descriptive, but the word “tiredness” seems out of place.

Okay, edited. Thanks for the heads upp!

& It is Stacie’s luck. Her badd luck.

It isn’t luck at all, it’s plot. Plot = Fate. Haven’t you seen Stranger Than Fiction? Every self respecting writer should watch that movie.

& I said I punched up when I meant him, idk wtf I was thinking.

I’m enjoying this unfolding story. Sorry for lurking, but I’m here now.

Typo, though, swap “a lot” for “alot” and your teachers will thank you.

you change tense from past to present, it should be present. And kinda stupid to pick the diner..

He’s everywhere. Why won’t he just go away? By now I’d have punched him more than once.

I knew it! That boy was in some serious trouble.