Nice. I usually don’t like stories with so much dialog, but this one is excellent. I especially like the transition into creepy trance talk and back to “normalcy”.

Thanks. I don’t particularly enjoy extremely dialogue-heavy ficlets, either, but this was sort of the only way I could think of achieve the goal of this sequel.

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Dude. Creepy. Very nicely done.

I can actually picture you having this conversation with somebody, minus the trance interjection. I really like the direction this is taking though. Sequel it.

I love the conversation in this piece. It’s telling without giving anything away. I’d like to read more but at the same time this piece stands up very well on it’s own.