Hmm… this is quite the thinker. Maybe there’s some philosophy I don’t quite understand… Translation: I’m not completely sure what you said, but I sure do like the way you said it.
I have no idea what I was exactly going for here, despite that I’ve been cooking it for an extended while. I like to pretend that I can be a game writer/designer if I tried, and wanted to come up with something where the player would control the villain who has to fight the heroes to attain their goal.
Then I got drunk and I thought that a Buddhist robot who fights Nietzsche’s heroes to kill the Tzaddikim, causing God to destroy the world, would be awesome. So much that I had to get it out of my mind.
One thing I wanted to pull off was to keep the protagonist’s intents and motivations hidden, despite that the player controls her. I’ll see if such is possible with simple prose… if I can be assed to continue this. >_>
Nice beginning ficly with a good end. The second paragraph of your comment convinces me you’ll write enough intriguing sequels of your own to keep me interested. Yes, I did just set a quota for you to fill. Have fun.