haha, intriguing, and anticipatory. I can’t see the pic, but the story is clever.

Thanks for entering! Could you put up the link to your pic though? Thanks

Alot like reality t.v. but I did not see the end coming. A twisted mind or a good story teller. mmmmm.lol.

I put the link in the tags, and I didn’t know it wouldn’t work – sorry.

Where else would it be a good idea to put it?

My picture is here:

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1194/1061897539_57f9d9145a.jpg

Wow this is great! Please sequel it??

Out of the purpose of the way we write ficlets, or pieces on ficly, I prefer not to write multiple-parted tales, as it defeats the point of brevity. But if you have a look in my tags, Tink, I asked if someone could write a sequel, because I’m very interested to see how it evolves.

So Tink, go for it, please….

this leaves so many questions… but is so good!

Yeah, this REALLY needs a sequel! It’s like the beginning to an epic story (or one o’ dem “Romantic Comedies”)