In the 12th line just one thing: “you giving” should be changed to “you’re giving” Love it! It’s great. Thanks for entering!
coughs I thought you were going somewhere else with that until I hit the second half. Then I thought the gift was kindness but that can be taken away from you. Good Poem! :)
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The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}