This piece is five years after the previous piece.

The very beginning of this story is at
http://ficly.com/stories/11014

The story has some very nice images throughout. I like the ending here. Some of the steps along the way(hospital scenes) were a little choppy, but overall it has a nice effect.

Valid criticism. I was suffering from an insane desire just to get this story finished last night, and the quality suffered a bit.

Mea culpa.

You made it. Well done!

I’d be interested to see what you’d make of it if you took what you’ve got and moved it outside the constrictions of the 1024 character scenes, but it works well as it stands.

Thank you. It was quite hard work to fit some scenes into the limit and I had to leave a lot to the reader’s imagination. It would have been rather different in nature in a freer format. Of course, having got here, I’d never start from where I did.

Anyway, thank you for the comments and for the inspiration to write this whole thing in the first place.

Thank you for this. I really enjoyed it! You are a really good writer and if I can be as good as you one day I’ll be very happy! =D

Given that I design chips for a living, being called a good writer is the highlight of my day so far. Thank you for making an engineer happy.

so I assume the cyber was exposed, the parents were taken in, but i’m disappointed in the field harvest, see, they should be like “We need to provide for our human future”.

Too much pain in that farm. It will be harvested, but she is putting distance between her past and her brighter future.