oooh! This is creepy. I like the feeling you generate and I also like the use of “you’re green eyes” meeting his “black”. Nice writing. One thing in the prequel, I am on the fence about the statement that says you, “never made it home” Is it truly necessary for foreshadowing or just extra? I can’t decided. Great Work!
Thanks 4 sharing.

Think it’s come across a bit differently than what I intended. I meant it like I didn’t complete the report. Thanks for your comment

Excellent foreshadowing in the first couple of prequels. I cringe thinking about what is coming in the next few sequels.