This hits the sweet spot, my friend. Exactly what I’m looking for.

You worked in a lot of description that managed to paint a clear image without taking away from the important of the character, or in this case, the object.

nice. lots of great words to help set the scene and tone. yeah, what silven said.. :)

Reminds me of Stormbringer, from the White Wolf series.

This is one of my favorite genres.

Intelligent weapons make my day.

If ya really like intelligent weapons I wrote something similar: “Excalibur, sword of dreams” or something?? I like it too..=D

Its nice! the description builds the scene very well!

Black Metal!