I know it’s too fast paced, but I didn’t have a lot of space to work with to fit in all the details I wanted to. I also realized I spun away from the eyes for about a minute— but what can I say, I’ve never met anyone will color-changing eyes before. shrugs I used first person, even though my eyes are definetly NOT hazel. I don’t know where the description of the eyes came from… But yeah.

I know it’s not what you’re looking for, so I’ll probably end up pulling out of the challenge.

Racing, I have color changing eyes. They turn red,black,and green.

No this was good. I generally try not to comment on the entries but this one I felt the need to. :P Not saying your going to win. It sounds like this guy has a monster within him to me. Don’t be alarmed at that comment. XD This is coming from the action-author.