OH SNAP!

GO MELINDA!

Stella’s got issue’s. Well it seems most if not all girls do when it comes to there emotions.

hmm, all good points, but she could have hit him harder, I think.. but as a writer, unless you know what will sting your character or have the most impact, you can’t write it with force. “your momma would be sad” seems a bit light. fake, un-authentic.. all good points, but they just don’t carry the weight.. hmm.. I mean he is technically raping the girl, though she probably would say it was consensual, and he is violating his marriage vows. I just think there needs to be more anger and hatred. But how to put it? *ponders