The light-hearted tone of this one is a contrasting foil to the gravity of the chilling events behind it.
Is this supposed to be a suicide letter home or something? It’s very good
nice! rorshach said it best.
awesome pure awespme pretty AnD good/
Wow…really good!
This is pretty good, but the meter could be more consistent.
Okay, the content of this one was too good to leave alone. Sequeled!
This has a lot of brilliant content – authentic – though as kaellinn18 says, the meter is varied which takes away from its overall power. It still manages to be a solid mood piece. Well done.