really good. this is one of those things that most of us can associate with. there is one thing that i might change though. in the second line of the third stanza it says cannot, no will not. it seems more effective to say will not, no cannot because it’s emphasizing how strongly you feel that you can’t let go.
ElshaHawk (LoA) 
Distant Memories 
The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}