Comments on Dieter touched his fingers to the wall. by Reverend Speed

kaellinn18

Chilling. Also, Dieter is a good name for a monster!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Reverend Speed

Thanks man. =) Hope that came through alright… thought Uplis seemed a little monstrous too…!
Thought I’d try to go for a dilemma per paragraph. Didn’t quite make it on the third one which is pure exposition, but otherwise it seems to tick along. STUFF IS HAPPENING! =)
- Posted about 10 years ago.
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

Cripes, that’s creepy. If your word can be trusted, stuff is indeed happening, and I’d like to know what that stuff is… keep it going!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
Reverend Speed

Hi there. My word can usually be trusted, but occasionally it needs interpretation, unfortunately. STUFF IS HAPPENING is a (comical?) phrase I tend to use to indicate that the narrative in question is action (internal or external) -packed.

This was kinda a writing exercise for me, so while I have some suspicions I really don’t have a plan for where it should go.

Er.

Glad you liked it, sorry there won’t be a sequel (for a while, anyway).
- Posted about 10 years ago.
Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

Yes. Stuff is happening. Definitely stuff. I don’t have a coherent comment, so here’s 5 pencils to show how I like it.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5