Thoughtful, worried, just a little heartbreaking (especially because it’s in rhyme, somehow). Yeah, James, you little fictitious character, we’re all thinking of you. Call sometime, huh?

Good job with the meter. A sequel that fits perfectly with the first.

I liked this because it was a mom reaching out for her child, acknowledging him but not pushing or demanding anything from him. She is giving him space, like he needs. Well said!

Hella nice job on the meter, and solid work on the content. Like How you kept the meter but broke the last line to make the form work too. Well done.