good twist at the end!
Unreliable narrator, there’s a lot more he’s not telling us.. great work!
Exceptional description. Wrenching twist. I liked this.
Exceptional description.
Wrenching twist.
I liked this.
He was burring me needs to be corrected (forgive my fussiness) Quite scary because suffocation is one of my biggest fears…hold on…this is going to be on the internet now…eek.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
C. Augusto Valdés
Bob Liddil
Abby (LoA)