awesome entry! the ending was surprising, and it completely turned the tables so we could see what was really going on.

Atmospheric, disturbing. That’s what I like about a short story!

Disturbs me alot. I agree with Augusto, it’s a lot of emotion in such a short piece. WEll done!

Kudos, for having this during the Salem Witch Trails period!

This was very intense and the ending what completley unexpected. Very enjoyable.

very good…it reminds me of the crucible :)