torturous.. many spelling errors here, and the sentences are very short and choppy, but here’s your best one: “Then he bit the knife into her throat.” I love that the knife bit her, not too much,a s you want her to suffer.. but one thing, she would have smelled gasoline right away as she stepped into her home.. I know i would.

…well lets say that she’s very ignorant then. besides, she was too busy be killed by the guy to notice

Gruesome. Impressively so. Not entirely convinced she’d hear the laughter over the sound of her house burning.

Spelling:
couch (unless you mean large passenger vehicle, which isn’t very likely in a living room)
Achilles heel (heal is getting better)
lost too much blood (know the difference between to, too and two)
he lit a match (tenses)

Good work, though. Keep at it.