wasn’t expecting explosive gunfire. it sounds like the woman is a little unstable.

Hahaha…yes, Nouvelle, just a little unstable.

This is a very good piece of writing, especially considering you already have an inkling where it will lead to, because you know the challenge. But even so, it grabbed me, held me, and surprised me at the end.

The gunshot out of nowhere was a lovely touch.

Poor Alan, I wonder if he really did cheat on her? She never lets him finish a sentence either.
Nicely done.

concealed gun was a shock, despite the title being all about murder, and the fact that he says ‘every day’ she accuses him, plus her obsession with his texts clues us in to her insanity. Though he knew who she was talking about, he provided the name Camille, so there was some sort of guilt..

This is very good. The gunfire did surprise me. I expected a noiseless death-say smothering or knifing. So this works well at grabbing the reader and surprising the reader as well.