hmmm…i’m intrigues as to what happened.

all you need now is a pick

possibly a stupid question, but what do you mean by pick :S?

he means icon.
this a great scene with a tense moment, some romance, and a satisfying end.

i thought so lol wasnt sure i usually see it spelt pic. thank you kindly for the comments all!

Lovely, dramatic moment. You did a great job here of giving the sense of a much larger narrative without going into a lot of detail or plot exposition. Has a sort of Dickens or Austen feel to it, I thought, in a good way.