I’m new to Ficly, so please, give me whatever criticism you’ve got!
And, I do now realize slightly too late that I should not have just hit “Write a sequel” for that challenge, so the second half is under Seequels right there.

that’s how you do it, link stories together by the ‘write a sequel’ link. :)
Welcome to ficly! I see you are contending with the character limit, and that is what challenges us.
This story is set up well, though what did he burn in the fire? does it have anything to do with his character? reading on..

I’ve read the whole story Angrypencils (and I really like your name, by the way), and enjoyed it very much. Perhaps the ending was a little flat, but it definitely did make one think about things.

Good luck with your future writings here, and welcome to you.

Yeah, I use this name for a lot of things, and I thought it to be rather appropriate for this website. :D
Endings are my weakness, I can’t seem to think of a fitting way to end my stories.