A well-written, extremely effective prologue to whatever mythological saga you or another ficleteer is dreaming up…

Considering the tension you’ve built up throughout the piece, however, I think that first line would work better put at the very end? Just a thought… Well done!

I get it, you have a big vocabulary.

armegeddon by a single enemy.. yet, without a god to slay, who is he?

man i wish i had time to leave this a more in depth commentary, but you’ll have to be satisfied with, this is a very nice fic. pencils galore

I don’t know whether this character is supposed to be emotionless, or if there is simply a lack of description in that area. Motivation would be an interesting facet to include in this story.

Otherwise, vivid natural imagery, and interesting plot.