ooo well this is going to be interesting to read isn’t it. I can’t wait till the sequel

Definitely a good start!

EeeeK!
Creeeeepppppyyyy!
But good, really good. :D

Eee! This is great, I hope you write more.

hmm wonder if there is some ancestry here, like her grandmother’s crazy sister that lived in a swamp who she only heard rumors of..
Or maybe she was hit by some sort of magic perfume in the hallway at school..
Or she was an experiment..
lol, just food for thought.

This is delightfully creepy. There are a few places where I’d disagree with your word choice (a portion of blood?), but overall I like it a lot.