such great impact. you described this quite well. something to relate to, for sure.

Well, that was dark and depressing. Feels like an accusatory sort of thing towards a lover who has just left you. Nice theme and emotion behind it all, though a few nuance things get in the way of it being great. For instance, you’ve one too many ’anyway’s in that middle bit, especially the one right by the ‘really’. Also, if it can be avoided, it’s best to avoid starting a sentence with ‘and’, even though it’s how many of us speak in common conversation.

Desolation, very solidly portrayed.