An immensely original and interesting concept – very quirky, and appropriately written :) That said you are URGENTLY in need of paragraphing, if anything because correct structure seems to be the kind of thing that would matter to Carl ;) And just a little typo: ‘peeled’ not ‘pealed’ – it’s a lid not a bell :D But well done, bucketloads of possibility here… MH :)
An immensely original and interesting concept – very quirky, and appropriately written :)
That said you are URGENTLY in need of paragraphing, if anything because correct structure seems to be the kind of thing that would matter to Carl ;)
And just a little typo: ‘peeled’ not ‘pealed’ – it’s a lid not a bell :D
But well done, bucketloads of possibility here… MH :)
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