Gorgeous. Effortless. Sweeping. Thrilling. If you have characters left, I would recommend breaking up into clearer paragraphs using line spaces, just to accentuate the sections. I love how one of your tags is ‘first story’ – I would remove it, as this reads as a story of a seasoned pro… Welcome to Ficly, Wanda McGritty – hey that rhymes!
Gorgeous. Effortless. Sweeping. Thrilling.
If you have characters left, I would recommend breaking up into clearer paragraphs using line spaces, just to accentuate the sections.
I love how one of your tags is ‘first story’ – I would remove it, as this reads as a story of a seasoned pro…
Welcome to Ficly, Wanda McGritty – hey that rhymes!
Wow! Thank you! That means a lot. I’m still figuring out formatting, but hopefully I cleaned it up a little bit.
Wow! Thank you! That means a lot.
I’m still figuring out formatting, but hopefully I cleaned it up a little bit.
Much better, you have most definitely solidified your 5 :)
if you were to describe a symphony, this is how you would do it. :) nice job! and welcome to ficly!
This is beautiful! Congrats on a job well done.
The best description of a piece of music I’ve ever read! Eloquent and lovely!
Mostly Harmless 
Wanda McGritty Mostly Harmless 
ElshaHawk (LoA) 
Nancy 
kaellinn18 Mostly Harmless Wanda McGritty Mostly Harmless ElshaHawk (LoA) Nancy kaellinn18