Oh my No God! Felt like a punch in the face! Breaking the timelessness I tried to keep in the originals makes an interesting effect and the ending is a scare shot. Thanks for your insight.
Er, yeah, sorry if I’ve disrupted the mood you were aiming for with that. =) You can always forget about the sequels on Ficly if you don’t like ’em, but I thought it might be interesting to put a little context around your prose poems. Thanks for the note…!
Reverend Speed 
C. Augusto Valdés