This certainly picked up as it went on – the second and third paragraphs were very strong – your character is obviously very fleshed out in your head, and that comes across well :)

In the first paragraph, you use the word ‘thoughts’ twice in relatively quick succession, which seems a little repetitive, perhaps you could change one? And I think you mean ‘the phone WILL buzz’ not ‘the phone WITH buzz’…

Otherwise, I really enjoyed it, well done – MH :)

O geez. Must have been a rough night

i think this is great i know the feeling all to well. i hope one day he realizes just what you did and why you did it so that way maybe this can all be but a dream and together again you shall be just remember how me and tyler were we didn’t talk for two whole years not one word and then all of a sudden back in my life he was and everything was perfect again maybe just maybe that will happen for you too