I love the title and all of the musical references.

Very well written the ending is my favorite.

Very beautiful and cleverly thought out. I love how you didn’t base the entire story about the line “Grab my hand” and I too enjoyed the musical reference. I had to read the first sentence a couple of times but it is very clever.
I love it lots.
Abby x

This. Is. Gorgeous. I wish I could give more than five pencils.

@kaellinn18 Thanks, lots of artists and authors have written about his act of courage during the civil war that tore Sarajevo apart in the 1990’s. I like spreading his message.

This is beautiful. A few lines read odd for me, but they didn’t detract from the message or disrupt the flow too badly. Love the concept.