Gosh, I just loved this story. I reread it several times because it was so good. I love how everything is worded and everything is perfectly explained.
I hope someone can sequel this and really move this ahead. Has great potential for something special.
Cute idea, especially since I have “known” people like this, especially in college when i was all over campus seeing teh same familiar faces every couple of days. A few of those multi-sentences got a bit long, or you just used them one too many times. Still, lovely, romantic idea fora story.