This is very creative. Also like Cid’s entery, your writing shows the cycle of a drug addiction. It was a little bit hard to follow, but once I got used to the way it was written, I was impressed. Thank you for entering.

I love the way this is written. Its very creative as Hobohemian said.

This is really good, I like how it comes full circle. The emotions are very raw and real.

So concise, with no loss of meaning – is brilliant economy, a racing car engine that will go anywhere fast.
To change metaphor (am I imitating you already?), flexing of muscles which tells me: say nothing, wait and see more.
Well I can do that; there is a lot more already after this.