This is a good entry. I like the point of view of the girl and how she likes it. I’ve seen many manipulative girls like that. Good job!

I laughed at the last two lines. I enjoyed her character and the manipulative touch.

Kudos for making it happen.

I also laughed at the last two lines. very good. =)

Straight and right to the point. I think this captured the challenge perfectly!

Wow, I never thought the last two lines were funny! But i like how it ends, it shows just how incest can screw someone up in the head.

I didn’t think the last lines were funny either. I used them because I’d seen a picture of the same words carved into a girl’s arm, I assume by herself. I found it entrancing and knew I would have to use it in this challenge.