This didn’t exactly go the way I had orginally planned but I’m still happy with it. The focus is off Jack and Lucas so hopefully no one will be too disappointed.

I think maybe this needs one more sequel to tie it up. It’s up to you guys; do I sequel or not? Or does anyone else want to have a crack at it cause that’s fine by me :)

Ehhhhhh. This has got to be sequelled with like Lucas—you know what, nevermind. I think I might sequel this.

Not the ending I was hoping for, I didn’t like the way it moved off of Jack and Lucas, but it’s petty decent.

I knew you wouldn’t like the shift in focus but can I say? I can but follow where the story leads ;D

hmmm… i may not like this…

I actually really like the shift in focus, or at least it didn’t bother me as much as some others. I really like the end, how you can sense what she might do but at the same time you are left wondering.