oooh…another historically-based story! And simply awesome too!
If I had’ve seen these coming I would’ve made a challenge around the idea of changing historical happenings…perhaps I will anyway.
This is great – lovely scene-setting that didn’t give away the crux of the story (I couldn’t even guess where it was going until I read the line about Kobe and Nagoya), and then when Enola Gay was mentioned, the punchline was also a surprise.
scratch'n'scrawl