What a shame this didn’t pick up much response, it’s a real emotional tour de force! Lovely imagery, good structure and pace – a twist, but not in the cliffhanger sense, it’s just a sad moment that lends some meaning to the rest of the story.
It dragged a little for me, but overall it’s a great piece… Where have you gone Abby? MH :)
Kendall Lynne
Mostly Harmless
Mr.Gabriel
Abby (LoA)