Men everywhere are saying, “NOOOOOO!” And you even admit the weakness yourself. But good entry. I don’t know if that’s horribly wrong, but good nonetheless.
I REALLY liked it! Of course I understand all of the men everywhere who are saying, “Noooo!” according to Horrorfan13, but I so appreciate characters (and people) who try to do what they think they should do. It takes courage & willpower, & the story was wonderful.