Absolutely perfect. I feel more comfortable in having put the controversial ‘Therys Sacrifice’ twist in now that you have written a stunning execution of the idea. Dialogue and description are both pitched perfectly, and you have cemented Gorm as one of my absolute favourite Ficly characters. Ever.

My favourite chapter so far – if this series carries on at the standard it’s maintaining, I recommend we pitch it to Hollywood…! MH :)

what have we done guys…this is amazing. How can Therys be dead?
I can’t believe it!
=O

it’s mh’s turn to write a sequel…

Nah, Abby, Therys isn’t dead, he’s just bidding his time. It takes a lot more than a mean serpent to kill a wizard like him ;)

You’re damn right he isn’t dead. No one kills Therys on my watch! :-)

Excellent job pulling the previous two entries together. Therys definitely feels more assertive in this installment; I definitely like him better that way. Wonderfully written!

wow these twists and turns you guys cooked up are great! This is a great tie-together. :)